Shalom
by: sardscreed
Lying in soft green grasses
I was thinking of the memories we had
Laughing and crying
We both shared in years that past
Is it really painful?
Or you must be thankful?
For you have knew and help me
In every step I may be
It is really sad to give up
Letting things to stood up
Having an unfair heart to lead us
In this desperate ways we had
Please don't be so ignorant
'cause I'm gone for a moment
Forgive me if I'm gone too long
'cause I done this no wrong
Can't deny what I'm feeling
For somewhat kind friend I'm leaving
In this nice world we've dreaming
We can do what it takes for living
Drops of tears from my eyes
Symbol of love for you I have
Have love and treasure for it
'cause I'm the one to guide you always
Shalom my friend, you know it's not the end
For it is the start of our long joyride
To the success and enjoyment
Of our free choosing journey
Maybe it's sad or happy I may
But to leave you is the most painful way
Farewell for this time
But not goodbye forever
by: sardscreed
Lying in soft green grasses
I was thinking of the memories we had
Laughing and crying
We both shared in years that past
Is it really painful?
Or you must be thankful?
For you have knew and help me
In every step I may be
It is really sad to give up
Letting things to stood up
Having an unfair heart to lead us
In this desperate ways we had
Please don't be so ignorant
'cause I'm gone for a moment
Forgive me if I'm gone too long
'cause I done this no wrong
Can't deny what I'm feeling
For somewhat kind friend I'm leaving
In this nice world we've dreaming
We can do what it takes for living
Drops of tears from my eyes
Symbol of love for you I have
Have love and treasure for it
'cause I'm the one to guide you always
Shalom my friend, you know it's not the end
For it is the start of our long joyride
To the success and enjoyment
Of our free choosing journey
Maybe it's sad or happy I may
But to leave you is the most painful way
Farewell for this time
But not goodbye forever
Anonymous says:
maaari mo pang pagyamanin ang iyong gamit ng metapor.
maligayang paglalakbay sa mundo ng panulaan.
rejserenity says:
hahahchar au.^^ emo ka kuya.?
jamesmalibiran says:
tsk tsk tsk... poet man diay ka chard?! hihi.. emo mo lng.. hehe...
Anonymous says:
that's so cute!
kenneth says:
whatever....
Mr. Wilson says:
EMOtera man day ka sards noh..
happy blogging..SmileS for you today..please come by..
The Rice Creator says:
poetang iring oh........... naa diay ka skill in poetry chard....... asa nimo na level and get....... wahahaha
April says:
inspire by mae... hehe... kuyawa jud ana nia ui. =P
SARDSCREED says:
pagxur daw pril woie..ahehe.inspire ka jan..bcg xpired..tnx 4 droppin by..
Anonymous says:
Nice poem
marco says:
did u really made this!?
cute
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hannah hernandez says:
char.!! aw